Made up in a small way for yesterday’s zero production by writing 595 words. Again the scene with Walter and his lieutenants. Received a second review at YouWriteOn (
see left, at the top under ‘Elin’s Links’). Took the opportunity to edit the extract. Replaced all the present tense forms in the first scene with past tense ones. Very minor edit. I hope it reads better.
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